JAY DEBNATH
Why shouldn't I??
Let my heart to fly,
To reach you before none...
To make you smile,
When I am gone...
Why shouldn't I???
Why shouldn't I
Say I like you??
Why shouldn't I
Say I love you??
Why shouldn't I???
Maybe it is true that,
"Love is like an hour glass,
The brain empties as the heart fills up"
But it is not the time,
To give up...
Then,
Why should I???
The whole poem is very beautiful….. especially “Love is like an hourglass,
The brain empties as the heart fills up”. So true. Loved the feel while reading it. Keep writing.
when everyone is writing
why shouldn’t I?
when everybody is living
why shouldn’t I?
Am I dead when I can’t understand
why shouldn’t I!
“But it is not the time to give up, then why should I?”
Afterall, these are the lines that help keep the hope alive…. beautiful stuff really.
Thank you guys for reading and inspiring me for writing. @Devyan , Priyanka, Jun, Bishaldeep. Keep supporting ☺️
Thank you puspita paul for your love and support… ☺️
Lines are so touchy..
Keep it up..
“Don’t be sorry for loving the way only your heart knows…” Incredible lines and an amazing meaning. Looking forward to read more of your work. Good luck.
It’s really wonderful jay
Keep it up roommate. I’m proud of you
Nice lines…. Keep it up. Keep on writing such awesome lines which always touches the heart of your near and dear ones.