Another Boy
Whom shall I choose to hug
The part of me you acceptedย
Or our memories you openly denied?
It wasn't a rejection, at least!
I feel worse but not the worst
Unlike it happened the last time
What's the use of spilling out myself now?
The foetal intimacy had a child called emptiness
Give me an excuse to apologize
So that I can get rid of this severity
An emotion, at the most suicidal
Common ground for sympathy has vanished
And we've lost the old charm
Once you used to be picturesque
Today thee have grown senile
I can see some links prospering
Where was that endeavour about us?
Am I boring, to a fault?
I thought you loved my eloquence
Was on the threshold of confiding in you
Resisted, tackling thy rivers of sophistication
Oh my Lord! Many thanks for this redemption
And bestowing the kindness on me
Via one of your favourite sons or siblings
Your poetry is food for soul mandy.
Looking forward to more ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ
Excellent ๐
It’s beautiful. โค
Nice poem gud job keep it up
Heart touching. Very nice.
Such a good poem…wish u success and happiness ๐ธ
I hope you get your love!
Great Job……. Keep it up… Gud luck…..
Very nice
Nice๐๐…
So good.!
Very emotional & heart touching poem. Gud work dear. Keep it up.
Gud job man๐๐
Keep it up๐
mindbolwing brow…no words for explain..
An emotion at most suicidal. โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
It shakes me! These words: “The foetal intimacy had a child called emptiness”! Such depth in such simplicity!
Keep writing!
xoxo ๐
How beautifully expressed !
Tantalizing …!!!
Keep it up mate..!!!๐๐ป๐๐ป
Awesome work……
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Vry nice๐๐
Beautiful poem.
I loved it….keep up the good work mightโฅโฅ
Amazing poetryโค๏ธ๐
Amazing… Keep it up
a poem with full of sadness. but the way of expressing your emotions is really very nice and appreciable.
Very touching……. Full of emotions…..great job… Wish you all the best dear….
Wow nice poem and nice write.
Bro that’s really gr8 poetry …. Appreciate your work ! ๐
Very nice
Amazing poem โบ๏ธ
Its too good…full of emotions though sad but still its good to be sad…..
Very NYC poem…๐๐
Great work man!
I really liked it ๐
This poem is a beautiful out burst of emotions..wish you success and love Another Boy โค
Amazingโคโคโคโค…. Intenseโโโโโ
Fan of your writings…you surely gonna get the happiness dear ๐ …just stay connected with you poetic work..! ๐
You can get everything you desire !! In love with your poetry ๐lots of love!