By Adityaroop Pathak
The longing wind was taxed
Sweating and sighing along
The sun and it's yearning rays
Cast upon the morning stage
And at noon and after, prying
So eager
The gregarious sparrow were chirpy
With their little yet dispersed wings
And they sang with eyes set low
Scanning the crystal flow
The foothills and horizon they scaled
But oh! Like the twilight sun they bailed
Crawling back into their nest
Tired wings went back to rest
The sky then procreated
A million inquisitive child
That sparkled with curious glare
And countless prodigal flair
The night, it spent along
With the scarred infant, that to the earth belonged
Together they hoed every corner of the sphere
But the dawn hovered upon their fate
Clocks and calendars turned their date
Once again, another day
Still unfound , undiscovered yet
Eyes like her another
Where all of the nature's charm combine
A glance of her eyes and she was mine
Great !!
Awesome
Good going
Cheers @ Tanvi Nagar
Sathwik ( a long long way to go man , a long long way to go )
And Vikash Tiwari .
Nice one Adityaroopak Pathak. Captivating and enthralling…
Nice..
Keep up the good work..
Its a really nice poem. Believe me you are the next Vikram Seth in making!
Its a really nice poem. Believe me you are the next Vikram Seth in making!
Good job
Thank you all for the appreciation . Means a lot . Also @ Aman Krishna I am sorry to say this but i don’t really recognise you . I am surprised to hear that you’ve missed reading my poems but if you want to read them text me on facebook (Aditya Pathak)
Amazing poem.I really liked your use of words. I have missed reading your poems and it feels great to be reading them again.
fantastic
It’s is really awesome…
Absolute stunner!
Majestic… Keep growing and going?
It is truly good. Nice use of words and such an elegant outline. Cheers.
Pure magic!
Really captivating and picturesque. ??