Tanvi Nagar
Dear love, I have always wanted to understand you more,
But first of all, you must know you are the one who I most adore.
Dear love, will you stand by me through the most rugged journeys of all?
Dear love, as years pass by will you be there still standing strong?
When there’s solitude that surrounds like the charcoal darkness of night,
Will you be there, like a solid rock strong by my side?
When gloom envelopes me, when pain is only what I feel,
Will a single touch of yours make my wounds and scars heal?
Dear love, when my life is nothing but a misty, smoky mirror,
Will you be the sunlight and beat life’s grey weather?
Dear love, when the sprinkler of affection waters our gardens of destiny,
Will you be treading upon this path with me as zestfully?
Dear love, when distaste is the only thing that binds us,
Will in our relationship arise a sense of distrust?
Dear love, life will put forward tests, how many would you beat?
Would circumstances change, would they be bleak?
Without words would only my silence be enough to communicate?
Would we know what destiny stores for us, our fate?
Dear love, when I’m absorbed in the deepest of darkness,
Will you still love and not consider me wicked and heartless?
Dear love, when we are separated by the barriers of cold war,
With all your heart and soul, will I be the one who you adore?
When my glass hopes and dreams are shattered and I bleed at heart,
Remember life and death can not tear us apart,
Once soul mates, we will always have a single heart,
Having a single soul, we’ll live together, together we’ll depart,
Our souls are united forever, regardless of storms or thunder,
Our’s is just an ordinary story of two extraordinary lovers.
Thanks Sir!
What words for a young child. Excellent
Thanks U!!
Kya baat hai. Deep words. well done
affectionately
U
Thank you so much, Ram and Rohit for your words. They mean a lot to me.
Someone who understands the value of love I wish could write like you little…
I think I feel as much what this poem signifies
Lovely piece 💓💗💞💐
Thanks
Well done….as always well done!!@@TanviNagar
Thank you Mansi!! Your feedback means a lot to me.
Hi Tanvi!
I saw your poem in Times of India NIE. I must say I am deeply touched by your words. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us!
Keep up the good work!
Thank you, Sharad Kamal Bezboruah. I have been writing since 5-6 years now.
Wonderfully done. How long have you been writing?
Thank you, Phuphaji.
Very nice Tanvi, your words are getting more powerful
Thanks Shreya Bansal.
Hey Tanvi.
Great poem I love the rhythm in it and the questions that go side by side. Like it. Good work.
Thank you Sumita Aunty. It was great to hear your words.
Your age does not prohibit your depth of a great feeling .You have gathered all nuances of love’s journey through the thick and thin of the unpredictability of life!!More power to you Tanvi!!!!
Thank you Prerna Ma’am
Beautifully worded tanvi nagar. This is great work.
Thank you Varun bro! Loved your comment because it means a lot to me.
Thank you, Aditya. That’s a great idea!
Thank you, Hakim.
Thank you, Anjali Aunty.
Thank you, Dimpy Aunty.
Thank you Sakshi Ma’am
Thank you, Monica Aunty.
Tanvi dear, reading your poem is always a delight. Your ‘Dear Love’ is yet again another masterpiece. Love you as always.
Wow Tanvi!! Loved the magical simplicity….It was so meaningful. I could connect heart to heart.
So well written?Enjoyed reading ?Keep it up ??
So well written?Enjoyed reading ?Keep it up ??
Loved and lived the poem Tanvi, the feelings were so beautifully worded, you will surely go a long way,much love
Very meaningful Poem full of Love
Very meaningful Poem full of Love
Hey Tanvi
What a great poem this is. Love the effort put into it. Great job done !!!
Hey tanvi nagar ,
I don’t know why but i have this feeling after reading your poem that you can be a good songwriter if you give it a shot . It might sound vague but yeah, you must .
I liked the numerous question that go along with the first feelings of love in our mind coz the heart can’t be tamed…this is a lovely piece for the same…:)