By Prajakta Kale
A well paid Nine to Five job,
Partying once a week,
And outing twice a year,
A perfect comfort zone: Cheers!
I dream something beyond this sweet boundary,
I have come to life and so wish to explore all and sundry.
I know I need to cross the less traveled path
There shall be criticisms
And an open invitation to wrath.
Between my dreams and societal expectations,
There shall be a continuous strife.
But I know for sure that dreams are not just fantasies,
Instead a true symbol of life!
My dreams have ignited fire with a powerful flare,
I have chosen to dare.
What people opine about me?
Ah! I simply don't care!
Wonderful. Your poem chimes with extraordinary.
Thanks a lot all of you for your valuable comments. It’s really encouraging for me.
very nice…..portrayed in very easily relatable manner….
Wonderful poem ……leave ur comfort zone ..ur dreams r waiting for u…
Wonderful poem, Prajakta! I believe in you and your abilities. Go show the world how it’s done!
Your poem reminds me the poem of Robert Frost where poet chose less traveled path.Bigger the struggle,bigger the success…….
Keep it up dear…..
Simply don’t care “Chosen to Dare”. Beautiful composition with real meaning and making sense to the current living style
Short and crisp. Well written. Cheers, Prajakta!
superb… Very inspiring . . All the best to ur future advantageous life..
Superb darling…..Great going..
Very nice..Chosen to dare
Ultimately your Dreams are more important… A wonderful composition of determined thought. Well Done …proud of you.
Nice poem…
Dare to move out of your comfort zone.
Awesome poem…
Dare to win..
Nice poem
Wonderful Prajakta