By Shriram Venkatachalapathy
"Sir! Thanks for my pension"
"My Man! Please do not mention"
"Oh God! Now there is no tension,
As a treat for my first pension,
I shall take my wife out for a luncheon
And relieve her from the kitchen…
To relieve myself from her cooking is my actual intention
But I cannot annoy her with such a reason…
Hence, I shall tell her that it is a treat for my first pension"
Short ,sweet and hilarious . Look forward to more Shriram
This was a fun read!
Enjoyed reading your humorous poetry. Best of luck. Keep it up.
Dear Shriram,
A witty read. Lovely play of words and rhyme. Keep them coming.
Regards
Lakshmi
Shriram very well written keep it up.my blessings to you keep going.
Shriram very thoughtful and well written poem. Wonderful Kudos to your creativity.
Keep up the good work and looking forward for more from you in the near future
Dear Shriram uncle
Your verses ever remain a treat,
Full of wit and so very sweet.
Each word a smile, each line a song,
You had me humming, all day long.
So here’s a clap and a joyous cheer
For your poem that’s ever premier.
What an amazing poem sir. So simple and profound. Best wishes.
Very well written with nice rhyming words. Great going Shriram.
With all best wishes.
Krishnan
2/8/2025 Coimbatore
Hahaha…Shriram’s forte… couldn’t stop laughing…I marvel at his ability to convey the maximum with the minimum…the choice of rhyming words…
Very well written by Shriram. It’s hilarious! Enjoyed reading it.
Very well written with wit and humour! Looking forward to more
A Flowing verse coined with well chosen adjectives..
Want to read more of your poetry..
Well Done
Witty…….nicely written. Brings a chuckle !
Witty…….nicely written. Brings a chuckle !
Eminently enjoyable! This tongue-in-cheek humour is so refreshing! Eager to read more from you, Shriram!
Sparkling and hilarious! Shriram once again churns out his creative juices to deliver another ingenious brilliance Kudos!
No one could have done it better! Three cheers!!!
You have a way with words, very witty, would love to read more of your contribution.
Whatta witty, mirthful, refreshing poetry!
Thoroughly enjoyed😁😄😃