By Adrika Surabhi Pandey

Tangled till the depths we linger about,
Within the dense cracks of our minds we are forever caught,
The beginning of an aimless war we always unfold,
Where the battlefield nothing more than regret holds,
Our little minds spell out the deed of vengeance and jealousy,
Pity, we can't follow a mere peaceful legacy,
When we easily conjure the spirits of hatred,
And find the symphony of mildness so complicated,
Then who are we to dwell in a fable where our desires collapse fulfilled,
Better are those forsaken valleys instead of human greed,
As the green pages of nature are treated like unwanted weeds,
Within the grasps of scattering bond and care,
We chose the smoke of violence and are found nowhere,
The torn pages of sympathy curl within cruelty's darkness,
Never before has the world been such a deep mess,
We blend with the heavy weight of dripping guilt,
Day by day, making our life take a turn and tilt,
Humanity weeps bitterly behind the locked and bars,
As the burning papers and quill howl from afar,
Deep, deep inside our cores, our real version sheds tears upon tears,
The hardness of the blade is more than firm and sheer,
Abide the molten crusts of promises held together,
Cut past the broken memories make hearts lighter than feathers,
Little do we understand how deep we lie in the devil's charm,
Which by word, is ourselves, flipping through melancholy and harm,
Just once, let's bring back the emotions and feelings,
And push away the letters and lines with no meanings.
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You are doing a brilliant job, keep pushing forward, your success will touch the sky.
Keep it up 😊👍🏻🤍
It’s so good.
I just feel the leisure reading this, keep it up bro.
I hope you will be successful in life.
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this is incredibly powerful. The raw emotion and the way you’ve captured the inner chaos of the human mind is just stunning. Every line hits hard, especially the contrast between peace and the hatred we often choose. Truly a beautiful work.
Your poem is incredibly powerful—so full of emotion, truth, and depth. The way you’ve captured human struggle and inner conflict is beautifully haunting. You truly have a gift with words keep writing, it’s amazing!
Wonderful poem
“Every word felt like it was dipped in stardust—your poem didn’t just speak to my heart, it hugged it. Such soulful beauty in every line. It is such a nice poem
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Your poem is hauntingly beautiful and full of depth. The way you’ve portrayed the silent battles within the human mind and the loss of peace in such poetic language is truly powerful. Every line carries emotion and meaning this is more than a poem, it’s a mirror to our world. Truly amazing work.
Beautiful written keep it up
Soulful poetry….keep it up!
Well done…very nice poem