By Priyanka Singh
The tide once took the sea to the sky
To date the floating fairy-clouds up high
It touched the swing and swayed it around
That had sailed off the ground.
For long the tide did belie
To flirt with hope and to pry
Glory, fame, the unanchored self-crowned
Until the deafening thunder did sound.
The swerving pride, the tide did fight
Bringing the braggadocio alight
To embrace the waves to the core
That kissed the feet at the shore.
कविता मानवीय जिजीविषा को सहज और रचनात्मक तरीके से अभिव्यक्त करती है।एक कविता की उम्र उसके पाठकों के मन पर दर्ज प्रभाव से तय होती हैं।प्रियंका जी की कविता समकाल को आवाज़ देती है
कविता मानवीय जिजीविषा को सहज और रचनात्मक तरीके से अभिव्यक्त करती है।एक कविता की उम्र उसके पाठकों के मन पर दर्ज प्रभाव से तय होती हैं।प्रियंका जी की कविता समकाल को आवाज़ देती है
This poem is a superb piece of creativity and gives an opportunity to the reader to swing with the clouds and standing on the tide of reality.
Your poem is a true work of art. Hats off to your talent and dedication!
This poem is an appropriate example of truly artistically wonderful poem in which you have weaved the simple things into profound meaning.
Congrats
Congratulations poetess. It’s really wonderful. It teaches us many things. We should value what we are, the humbleness. Thank you
It’s wonderful poem.
Good to read a poem with quality of words along with quality of meaning with economy of words and with great literary expression after a long time through living in a world of Techies’ Fantasy….
Personification, Allegorical, Romantic imagery like….Tide on date with clouds…Me on different interpretation like tide with pride like an arrogant young boy taking clouds on date and flirting…..with the interventions of thunders in the form of predicaments one will definitely downfall in reality…..Skin to Life of humans
Nature and life woven so beautifully….. Wow!
Great going dear.
Ur imagery n rhythm makes it a great poem.
Congrats
Very nice dear, good going, feeling proud of you.