By Aditri Naru
The bridge of moonlight over the tiding sea,
Escaping from the bondage of clouds all free.
And as the torch of night lighted up in the sky,
Seeing the trembling earth below it gave a sigh.
The eager child bounced up and down even without the tiniest frown,
High up and above the smiling mother gently calmed it down.
And as the torch of night lighted up in the sky,
Seeing the trembling earth below it gave a sigh.
She blew her sheen warmth all over it,
Till even she was satisfied that each part of it was a sparkling bit.
And as the torch of night lighted up in the sky,
Seeing the trembling earth below it gave a sigh.
People in and around were shocked to see the rising tide,
What they did not know was that the child within was going towards his mother’s side.
The women were stunned at seeing the moon the most calm ,
What they did not know was that even she was running towards her child's arms.
And as the torch of night lighted up in the sky,
Seeing the trembling earth below it gave a sigh.
As the child gently embraced his true belove
A tear escaped as we knew they won't meet the one they love.
A beautiful painting drawing and above all what a nice poem.hearty loved, no words to praise keep it up.
Loved it! Proud of you, keep going!
Wow, it’s Beautiful, well written. Keep writing more
Beautifully written!!
Keep going Darling👍🏻
Beautifully written!!
Keep going Darling👍🏻
Loved the words chosen.. beautifully crafted !!!
Wow Aditri very nice keep going best wishes for many more.
Wow Aditi fantastic, very nice
Loved it.
Lats have some more
Awesome Aditi. Keep it up
Excellent, keep it up
Excellent, keep it up
Simple and powerful poetry, keep it up
Lines beyond the praise !!! Keep it up and wish you all the best !!!
Lines beyond the praise !!! Keep it up and wish you all the best !!!
Absolutely amazing — I loved the writing and the emotion behind it. Keep it up. God bless you
Good one stay blessed
Dear Ada – Such a wonderfully well written poem. Wish you tue best and continue to make us all proud.
Stay blessed. – Raman Raina
Excellent! Keep it up. Stay blessed
Your start up in the field of narration of poetry with a beautiful title The Childhood Beacon is really impressive and heart touching. I am personally highly impressed. I appreciate your hardworking and zeal of inventory targeted achievements. God bless you. our best wishes. We will be eager to see your new narrations in future also.
So proud of u Aditri ,u r genius ,keep it up
Heart touching…… Waiting for many More..
Heart touching…… Waiting for many More..
Excellent.. Keep it up
Beautiful narration
Your words are full of feeling and truth. That is something people will always want to read. This poem is a beginning, not an end. There are so many beautiful poems still waiting inside you. Keep writing…
Loved it
Love it