By Nilofer Parveen
On the bark, I stretched down to repose
And I beheld above, a serene beautiful sky
Holding Ineffable beauty, I dare to disclose
Urging me to articulate, so here i scribe why
Lost in the quietude of the azure canopy,
I gazed at the embedded clouds trailing high
Hues of heaven dispels, any air of melancholy
I ardently admire nature, so here I scribe why
The warm sunshine held me in its embrace
Pinning me down by its warmth, could I defy?
But, to turn this moment into a remembrance
To be etched in my heart, so here I scribe why
The zephyr caressed me into a deep slumber
Indeed a spectacle of tranquility, none can deny
Reclined on the bark, I perceived what lies yonder
Should the reader fathom?, so here I scribe why
Nilo,
Incredible👏👏 !
I take pride in saying I was an inspiration to such wonderful poem !
Reading the poem made me relive the moment again !
Thanks to u😊
I wish u pen more poems
Alas ! let many more inspire u !
“what a amazing poetry!” you delivered about mutual understanding between the human and the nature. You just nailed it with your beautiful words. GREAT!
About nature and one own self … In the company of nature, the thoughts are filled with love and embrace. It’s like mutual connection and understanding between the human and the nature. Lovely piece of introspection of nature and one heart’s sensitivity…
Such a beautiful piece.. I could almost feel the breeze and warmth that you describe.. The repetition of the title adds a lovely rhythm.. Your words brought calm to my day.. Waiting to see what you pen next..
Nilofer Parveen deserves genuine praise for crafting a piece that beautifully captures the quiet majesty of nature and the profound emotions it evokes. This work reflects both sensitivity and poetic skill — a testament to the poet’s deep appreciation for the natural world and their talent in articulating it. Bravo!