By Apurva Srivastava
I saw her every morning,
As she rushed in her traditional attire.
Under autumn’s shredded trees,
In her anklets and bangles she perspired.
Clad in my denim jeans and cotton shirt,
I found myself and her walking together for a while.
She greeted me inquisitively as our momentum matched,
And I replied with a condescending smile.
I adjusted my branded shades,
Then flipped my cap as a gesture of pride.
I introduced myself as an accomplished woman scientist-
And admiring me, she paused her stride.
I boasted of my innumerable researches and talks,
I flaunted my wisdom, struggles, and strife:
“Breaking the shackles of orthodox traditions,
Unbound by anklets, I soar high.”
“But I feel sad for women like you,” I told,
“Who still adorn vermillion, anklets, and bangles-
Dwelling in the past, embracing traditions,
Or forced to do it to avoid societal wrangles.”
Surprisingly, she just smiled with a sigh,
And politely enough, breaking my monotony,
She explained, “As I rush under trees with chirping birds,
My jingling anklets resonate with their musical symphony.
My traditional dupatta is held in place by my laptop bag,
My bangles tinkle with joy as I type codes in seconds.
The finger ring shines with pride,
Whenever I write or I reckon.
That trinket in my earring flits,
As I flit from computer systems to files.
I learn from some, I guide others-
Embracing science in my traditional style.”
She spoke about her lab experiments that failed,
And scientific simulations that were held.
She wiped away the drops of stress,
Condensed as sweat on her forehead.
That was when her bindi came undone,
Snapping me back from the spell of her discourse.
“Your bindi,” I said abruptly with concern.
For replacement, hurriedly she opened her purse.
“Honored to meet you, scientist madam,” she said,
“But I too have my share of sky.”
Placing her bindi between eyebrows, she asserted,
“As you are a scientist-so am I.”
Dil ko choo lene wali rachna. Bhartiya sanskriti aur parampara ka bohot sunder varnan kiya h. Hum apni sanskriti ko apna kr bhi Akash ki bulandiyon ko paa skte hain. Apne sunder vicharon ki Khushboo se jg ko mehkati rho.
Great poem.
Beautifully written.Each line feels carefully crafted.“The imagery in this poem is so vivid, I could picture it perfectly.”Well done dear.❤️❤️
Very nice lines
Heart touching , best wishes for your bright future
Very nice
As an Indian, I can say it touches heart of so many people in the furthest corner of our nation.
This poem ignites a sense of pride within us and highlights the true and real essence of our tradition and culture. A big round of applause to author for reviving essence of our tradition and making us realise it’s worth.
Thank you author ,thank you so much for redirecting us towards a wonderful path we could’ve missed.
We indian are fan of our tradtion and touch the every corner of world without any hesitation.
Beautifully articulated. Loved it.
A sense of pride in indian culture and traditions beautifully sketched.This shows a bright future of India i.e. Bharat. I am sure that this poem will certainly enrich the people of Bharat its high values.Many many thanks to writer for attracting our attention towards our values and filling our hearts with sense of pride.
हृदय स्पर्शी पंक्तियां
हमारे संस्कार हमारी परम्पराएं हमारी उन्नति में बाधा नही होती परन्तु हमारे भीतर अपने संस्कारों पर गर्वित होने का अह्सास कराती हैं नयी पीढी के ऐसे सुन्दर विचार
आप आगे भी ऐसी ही कविताएं लिखती.रहिए शुभकामनाये