Line On The Black Stone – Delhi Poetry Slam

Line On The Black Stone

By Deeksha Mane


The worst nightmare of a mother came true-
the soul of her son in the heavens flew.
Kisa Gotami had him in her arms,
asking for help through streets and farms.

His lids, half-shut, killed her alive.
She ran through the wheat fields, hoping he would survive-
whispered the wheat crops: "He's no more."
Yet she continued, with cuts at her heart's core.

His freezing body gave her a deadly chill,
as the soul escaped through the stitches-nothing left to heal.
Her warm liquid sorrow fell on his face,
but still, the corpse had no movements to trace.

She wanted to bring him back to life,
and heal the wounds given by the fates' knife.
Touched by her grief, came a kind man-
offered her help, all that he can.

He brought her to Buddha and asked for help,
hoping he could hear her heart's yelp.
"For a handful of mustard seeds," asked he,
"I'll bring your child's soul back to thee."

The overwhelmed mother set off for the quest,
but Buddha told her to listen to the rest:
"Seeds must be brought from a house where Death kneels down,
bows to Life and sacrifices its crown."

Till dawn, she searched every house in sight,
but every home had already kissed Death goodnight.
The houses seemed like residential burial grounds,
where people lived with spirits around.

Kisa Gotami understood what Buddha wanted her to be known as-
for Death is a line written on the Black Stone.


4 comments

  • Such profound words. I could feel her pain and desperation in every line. Keep writing, kind stranger. I hope your words continue to bring comfort to anyone who reads them.

    Anoohya Kanaparthi
  • Reading this felt like I was holding her pain with her. The way you wrote it… so raw, yet so graceful. It’s not easy to write something this deep and still have every stanza flow so naturally. I’m so proud of you dear for creating something this meaningful.

    Bhakti Mudgal
  • This poem truly touched my heart.

    The way you’ve portrayed Kisa Gotami’s pain and the deeper message about death is incredibly moving.

    Your imagery and emotion gave me chills. Keep writing, Deeksha – your words carry so much power and meaning.

    Proud of you!

    Mayur Dongare
  • I really admire you my friend!
    Keep it up and keep writing..
    I will be always your reader

    Sharvari Potdar

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