By Shambhavi Singh
Dark confined yet pleasant,
In a cave I used to hide,
questionnaire of prison or freedom, filled me with dread up front,
damp cave walls exclaimed 'you have to survive!'.
A splinter to the drowning bruised soul,
A ray of light from the brightest of the stars,
Like a pack of sunbeamy little ones,
Like light shines out of darkness, there you are!
Oh dear! Where have you been?
Eyes widened, heart fluttered,
Are you the answer to my questions? women in love are indeed a toddler.
His presence chased away blankness, Unhinged, empty minds are unreal,
A feeling I could never express,
of how he made me feel !
कविता की हर लाइन उम्मीद कहा सहारा देती है🌷🌷
Every single line of the poem is written beautifully. Keep it up Shambhavi!!
🌼🤍 सुन्दर
So beautifully penned….every line expresses the emotions of true love so gracefully.
This poem is worded so beautifully! I am so in awe of you framing the feelings so beautifully <3
Nice
It’s raw, real, and resonates with anyone who has ever felt lost and found in the presence of someone special🙌
“The most Beautiful thing I read today. 🌼
The contrast between darkness and hope is powerful – especially loved the line ‘damp cave walls exclaimed you have to survive’.
सुंदर कविता जो दिल को स्पर्श कर जाए
Loved how beautifully you portrayed the feeling of love with the right person ❤️
Beautiful lines.