Anupreet Kaur Kalsi
Eh lafz bde hi doongy ne, eh unsiyat/ mohabbat da vall dasde ne…
Eh dooby vich siyahi de, eh lipat lipat ke ronde ne…
Eh jazbatan de nal bhare hoy, eh dulle rang jehe Lagde ne…
Eh lafz bde hi….
Kade tapash ehna di mar deve, kde moh moh ke eh moh lende..
Kde chup da roop eh Dhar lende, kde shor bda hi Paunde ne…
Eh lafz bde hi….
Mohabat agge eh luk jande, mann andar rola paunde ne..
Us ik nu bda kuj kehna chaundy, pr parda jeha pa lende ne..
Te andar de bhed jo buj lenda, us agge eh ro painde ne..
Eh lafz bde hi….
Kde rooh nu Laggn Khuraak trah, kde jeher vang eh vehnde ne..
Samey anusar lavo vart ehna nu, syane bajurg eh kehnde ne..
Kde sifat Karan , kde dua Karan, kde Hassan Ron lag painde ne
Eh lafz bde hi doongy ne, eh mohabbat da vall dasde ne…
Very well written with a great sense.keep it up
A Masterpiece of Feelings and Words
Anu, ’ Eh shabad bade hi ‘anu’ ne parmanu di haisiat rakhde ne
Eh vekhanu ta sirf alfaz ne
Par ruh nu tumban di kafiat rakhde ne
Eh rodean de sang ronde ne
Eh hassdean de sang hassde ne
Keran nokal ke teer wangun zuban vichi
Eh dhur dil de ander wasde ne
Kadi hallasheri den eh dilnu khede ch
Kadde gm ch nasior ban eh akhian thani rasde ne
Sabad ta shabad ne kade vi arth to kore nahi
Par bin arthe vi eh kadi kadi siddhe ru andar nu dhasde ne
Maneya zazbatan di aapni hi bhasha jundi
Par chup reh k vi lagz kai raj dilan de dassde ne
Aaive na jani lagzan nu ehna nu ajai gawai na
Aive belore bematlabe kite bol ke
Vekhin “Nikku” kadar ghatavin na.
Anuoreet teri kabita fi uttamta da jawab aapni navi kavita nal de reha.
Shabash ! Wadhia likhea h tusi!
Keep it up!
Kya baat❤️
Congratulations ma’am . Amazing poem.. keep it up 👏
Congratulations Anupreet 💐👏👏! Very interesting poem, eh lafz bde hi amazing ne, ehna nu jinna tarasho, eh har vaar naya roop lai lende ne… Very nice 👍❤️
Bhut sohna likhya aa mam……i appreciated your hard work
Amazing! Im really fortunate for having a bright co scholar like you. Best wishes 👍
Beautiful and heart touching words 🌟
Heart touching words
Deep words……👏 💫
It’s beautiful and soulful 👏
V nice… amazing and touching… well done 👍
Thank you delhipoetryslam…🙏🏻