By Puchaginjala SreeVasavi
I woke up
to live soul-fulfilling delight
not the one on the outside
but the ecstasy and bliss
I identified on the inside
on a random day
The bliss told me to breathe out
the burden
of pain, of love, of everything
that evoked unfulfilled expectations and unmet desires
The bliss whispered that I can
finally stop running,
not on the outside but on the inside
in my mind
The bliss patted me
to remind me
that spiraling loop
can finally stop
The bliss in me
sang a song
that day, allowing me follow the rhythm
the rhythm of now
The bliss probed ecstasy
evoked a recall
of being nothing
of not knowing tomorrow is
a blessing more than a curse.
I woke up to live one of the merriest
days on earth
To breathe at my own pace
To think in my own space
To be unfettered enough by tomorrow
To spread my wings again
on my own
not by force
but by Love
Maybe this is the first time
I got to experience
what bliss means
that people always talked about
in the external world.
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Your poem is beautiful and full of feeling. It showed inner peace in a way that touches the heart.You go girl..,
Wonderfully expressed! Keep sharing your amazing thoughts and continue expressing yourself even more.
This is really beautiful. It shows how true happiness comes from inside and brings peace to the heart.
Your words feel calm and full of meaning, like a gentle hug for the soul.
It’s really good All the Best 👍🏻💖
I have known Vasavi from such a long time and I have always felt she would be amazing at everything she does and this poem proves it. So beautifully written 💓
“Beautifully expressed! Your words capture the essence of inner liberation and the joy of living in the present moment. Truly inspiring” . Many Congratulations
The poem is amazing. Your words are powerful! Keep writing ✨
The whole time while reading the poem I was smiling , so beautifully written I could feel the liberation the character experienced 🫶🏻