By Karishma Vig
I woke up in the morning
And did my morning chores
I sat with my cup of tea
While rest slept with snores
I felt a little different
But paid no heed
It's normal for a women
Who ignores her need
Where's my breakfast
I heard a voice
I prepared the meal in hurry
And I heard the same twice
I regained the stamina
Which was missing that day
A lot of things needed to be done
How could I lay
My laundry my dishes were waiting
While I was being slow
I went on and on
Not knowing it was time to go
everyone's need was fulfilled
And morning chores were over
I again took a cup of tea
But still felt lower and lower
Now it was time for second shift
I got up for afternoon routine
The kids were back and elders relaxed
The house was neat and clean
By this time I had known
That it's more than normal feel
I would get restless and uneasy
And lost my entire zeal
The kids came,they kissed and cuddled
And hugged me like a wreath
I too tried to reciprocate
And took my last breath
Beautiful poem,very well written!
I am " TOUCHED "🫶🏻🫶🏻
Beautifully penned your as well as our emotions from being a girl to a lady to a wife to a daugher in law and finally to a mother . Loved your creation♥️
Very touching God bless ❤️
Hi Karishma, your poem is a moving reflection on the often overlooked sacrifices and resilience of women. Your words deeply touch the monotonous routines, silent struggles, dedication and selflessness of women. I could resonate with it so much. Congratulations on writing this beautiful and thought provoking piece!
Very Well written, keep it up!
Beautiful poem and true words
What a beautiful way of expressing a woman’s daily routine thru a poem.
Every single word touched my heart to the core.
Great Job Karishma
Beautiful reality of every women
Beautiful written.. with many emotions
So well defined womenhood .Only a women can define the true personality of a women. Just felt proud on being a women.We are simply Awesome.
Bravo ! Karishma vig
Heartfelt rendition to a woman’s life. Beautifuly written Karishma👏🏻
Well written…beautiful poem 👌
Well written..Must have been heartfelt by many women out there who live thru their whole life doing the same stuff for the family and kids without any complaints and hesitation..kudos to all lovely women
Sooo heartfelt and intricately crafted
Very beautiful described the day to day chores done by we all. The self care is more important. Salute to the women’s.
Wow….beautiful poem…well done karishma 👏👏👏
Beautifully crafted and expressed
Your poem beautifully conveys the emotional and physical toll of a life spent in constant service, with little regard for personal needs or health. It’s a moving reflection on the often invisible burdens carried by women and serves as a poignant reminder of the importance of self-care and recognition.
U rock Karishma 👍
What a Superb lines about the feeling of women in day to day life. Its true for every women. Love the way the emotions n feelings described. Salute to all women