By Swati Thakur
I was smashed to smithereens
When you left me,
A sombre whiff of gale came and said me you are broken.
I nodded,he has left me and asked me to forget moments.
Another quivering came and smiled
I questioned , why you smiled ?
It rejoinder because you are separated forever.
Whiff continued asking questions
I kept answering it
Last gust of wind passed a scornful utterance.
Not thinking of being free from this barrier between us
And word I need to say
I just need to tell that
"I am not okay "
I felt hurt because I was broken.
Good one
Wah bahut badhiya….. Keep it up
Excellent written Swati!!
Last gust of wind passed a scornful utterance.. very well expressed Swati loved it
Last gust of wind passed a scornful utterance.. very well expressed Swati loved it
Very well written 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Heartiest Congratulations Swati!
Lovely poem. Keep writing and touching our hearts. So proud of you!
Well written. Please keep writing
Heart touching poem,with a deep meaning.
Well written
Such a beautiful poem..
Well Written
Good One, It’s intense.. It leaves many thaughts to ponder
Well written
Super.touching heart .with deep meaning