Broken

By Swati Thakur


I was smashed to smithereens
When you left me,
A sombre whiff of gale came and said me you are broken.
I nodded,he has left me and asked me to forget moments.
Another quivering came and smiled
I questioned , why you smiled ?
It rejoinder because you are separated forever.
Whiff continued asking questions
I kept answering it
Last gust of wind passed a scornful utterance.
Not thinking of being free from this barrier between us
And word I need to say
I just need to tell that
"I am not okay "
I felt hurt because I was broken.


14 comments

  • Good one

    Aradhana
  • Wah bahut badhiya….. Keep it up

    Geetika chaturvedi
  • Excellent written Swati!!

    Satyen Sodha
  • Last gust of wind passed a scornful utterance.. very well expressed Swati loved it

    Sanat
  • Last gust of wind passed a scornful utterance.. very well expressed Swati loved it

    Sanat
  • Very well written 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

    Shashank Sarvagoud
  • Heartiest Congratulations Swati!

    Lovely poem. Keep writing and touching our hearts. So proud of you!

    Janhavi
  • Well written. Please keep writing

    Ruchi sharma
  • Heart touching poem,with a deep meaning.

    Pratibha Singh
  • Well written

    Arav
  • Such a beautiful poem..

    Jyotsna
  • Well Written

    Veena Rananavare
  • Good One, It’s intense.. It leaves many thaughts to ponder

    Well written

    Bhavesh
  • Super.touching heart .with deep meaning

    Kavita Surana

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