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STREETS

VIDHYALAKSHMI M

Have you seen any Indian street,
Loads of people rushing on their feet!

Watermelons and juice stalls to beat the summer heat,
The sight of all of this is a worthy treat!

Street vendors selling things on a sheet,
Crowded places where the crossroads meet,
Even being busy, the people never forget to greet!

You will get everything you wish to eat,
From golgappa to ice cream to sweet!

Buses, trains and cars have people on every seat,
I watch the busy street from my backstreet!

The streets are always away from the mode of discrete,
And the another day goes on repeat!

Without which I feel the life is basically incomplete!


18 comments

  • Adorable words!! Words,placed and choice of the words were exquisite. Keep going and I love the way you use the language, English.

    Venkat
  • Wow! That’s more like a piece of an art, capturing all the minute details of all the street events within that sublime poetic frame, frankly, I could as well imagine and place my self amidst all those street ventures that are going on in this very brilliant poem of yours.

    Great Work Ms Vidhyalakshmi!

    NAZEESH EBRAHIM
  • You have a beautiful mind….
    Your writing is Fabulous…Your choice of words is __________.
    Have you ever thought of publishing your work? Do it.

    R.Vishal
  • This is what a poetic treat ❤️❤️❤️👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🔥

    Sai Gayathri
  • Wow! That’s more like a piece of an art, capturing all the minute details of all the street events within that sublime poetic frame, frankly, I could as well imagine and place my self amidst all those street ventures that are going on in this very brilliant poem of yours.

    Great Work Ms Vidhyalakshmi!

    NAZEESH EBRAHIM
  • Wow😍❤️that’s so cute… Even when busy, ppl never forget to greet.. Wow supr

    Gayathri
  • Woah ! Love this ❤️
    Got me nostalgic on normal condition of our city in this pandemic situation

    Thamil
  • Small things create a big impact…well noticed & Describe so well in a poetic manner…impressive😍 keep up the good word🤗

    Anjali
  • Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious..🔥

    Sriram
  • The way portrayed looks great !

    Reethu
  • Lovely❤️🌼❤️

    Vanshika Tomar
  • such beautiful description ❤️💐

    parul sharma
  • What a hearty way to express. Awesome yaar carry on with ur beautiful writings.

    Siddhu
  • Lively & lovely 🤩

    Vishnuprabha
  • Wowoowow!!!🌈good read

    Hema Brindha
  • Go on!! Rock dear

    Jingley!
  • Go on!! Rock dear

    Jingley!
  • Nice One Minion🤓💜
    Loved it👌🤩

    Vigneshwaran L

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