By Vaishali Passi
Once upon a time
There was a time
When the sunrays were amiable
And the people seem amicable
The new day was cheerful
Where optimism was hopeful
Hazed with the opia
The world seemed utopia
Until that day..
When that devil acquainted me
With this pretentios world
And its obtensible people!!
I bellowed..
I begged for my prestige
But all in vain
He corrupted me
Without my consent..
He numbed me
Making me absent..
No more,the sunrays seem friendly
The days and night seem ghostly
Worst of all was
I did survive..!
To repent ,whole my life
Perceived that day
People are more eerie
Than those nightmares spree
The world changed for me..
The hope ended in me..!!
No one can get..
The pain I have to beget,
The pain of being assaulted
The pain of being ruined.
The pain of left alone
The pain of becoming forelorn.
@sanya its my pleasure that you spared up your time to read my piece and suggested what to be improved in this!
I"ll definitely work up on that!
Thankyou you very much :)
Nice poem. Would love if you used some imagery or metaphors to describe the pain.
Great work, though!
Thankyou guys!
Amazing…!✨✨
beautifully written.!!
Wow?? you write so beautifully… Keep flowing.
Thankyou everyone!
Thankyou for sparing you time to read the expressions of my verse!!
Great thoughts ✌️??
Beautifully written. Keep going?
Awesome one…..!!!!
Keep going!!
Another awesome one
Very well written!! Proud of you!!
Beautifully written!!
Keep going
Proud of you Vaishali?
Beautifully written?
Beautifully written?
Good going vaishali …!
Beautifully written!