BY MAHIMA SETHI
New to the world,
New to the society.
Can't even speak a word,
And you left me bruised and in pain.
Oh! I was just a baby!!
Just turned six,
Just started enjoying my childhood.
Was so innocent and pious,
And you snatched my innocence.
Oh! I was just a child!!
At 13, I gained senses,
I just hit puberty.
Just started facing challenges,
And there I was with another life in me.
Oh! I was just a teenager!!
I just entered adulthood,
Ready to hold some responsibilities.
Mature enough to take decisions,
And there I was with a ripped dress of mine.
Oh! I was just a new adult!!
Later I was all set with a family,
2 tiny tots calling me mommy.
Queen of the house I was called,
And there I was in blood on the road.
Oh! I was just a mom!!
At last, had fulfilled all my duties,
Indulged in prayers and hymns.
Patiently waiting for the death to approach,
And there I was with lying helpless on the floor.
Oh! Even if I'm a grandmom!?
None of you or me are secured in this world,
Now, here I am scared at home all curled.
Such an act is a crime and not a mistake,
You've shaken my soul but I pray my strength doesn't break.
Oh society, your injustice keeps killing me,
Just like your boys, I always wish to be free.
Awesome lines go ahead with many wishes
Amazing thoughts at this age!
Amazingly expressed…applauds fr litl gul wid grt thots
Simple yet so powerfully delivered…
a beautiful piece of writing😇
Wish you luck for your future work and would love to read more stuff composed by you… MAHIMA🙂
The dictator of Germany, the 3rd reich applauds you.
Amazing poetry Mahima….Keep it up 👌👌
Very heart touching poem….. Beautifully written. Great job mahi.
Amazingly written!! 😍
Your poem writing skills are fabulous!! ❤️❤️❤️
This is such harsh truth in our country, I wish this would be fixed soon.☹️
Soo true….. Good job mahi❤
Wow! An amazing piece.👌Well done my girl❣ keep it up❤
Gr8 piece!! Congratulations Mahi!
I love what you write . keep it up and share more such beautiful pieces of work with us❤
Oh my god💕 it is worth reading❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Amazingly written!!
Congratulations Mahima💐
Splendid.. beautifully written
Very expressive and touching.👏👏👏 keep up the great work Mahima
Poem is speaking, not you speaking the poem. It is exceptionally well written. Looking forward to reading your next poetry…
Good job maah……. proud of u my girllll😘😍❤
Wow…beautifully expressed!! Well done and keep up the good work. God bless Mahima.
A beautiful thought penned very lucidly.
Keep it up and continue with your good work Mahima 💗
The entire poem is very well written. Good job Mahima 👍🏻
Such a heart touching piece.. true mirror to this patriarchal society. Keep going dear….
It’s so captivating!!
You expressed such intense emotions through your words so eloquently that it stirred me indeed!!
Amazing work done.. looking forward to more enthralling pieces ♥️
Wow ! beautiful , heartfelt poem … keep up the good work. Looking forward to read more poems written by you.
Such heart wrenching topic written so appropriately and beautifully. Story of every girl’s life which needs to reach the conscience of every man out there. Keep it up girl!
What you have stated here is the depiction of our so called sophitisticated society. Keep us the good work dear
What you have stated here is the depiction of our so called sophitisticated society. Keep us the good work dear
Very beautifully expressed!
Simply superbly splendidly soul-stirring!👏👏
Beautiful expressions!! It touches d core of heart emotionally n at d same time presents d inherent strength n courage a woman has!
Awestruck 😍😍 Super-duper amazing, Mahima ♥️♥️
Very well done 👍
Keep posting, girl 😘
Will be waiting for more
Beautifully Expressed Keep it up!
Wow Mahima!! Beautiful feelings…. keep it up dear..
Wow!👍
Well written Mahima. Keep it up.
well done mahima, nice poetry, keep it up.
Beautiful feelings. It touched my heart.
Beautiful feelings. It touched my heart.
Beautiful feelings. It touched my heart.
Very well expressed Mahima…Can see a budding poet expressing amazing thoughts, Keep it up!!! God bless you…Author can’t be blank.
Congratulations.. 🎉🎊 Mahima.. Wonderful.. What a powerful expression you have.. Keep it up.. God bless
I can see Mahima blooming .love and power to her👏
Compendious!! Each word is full of emotions.. I could feel it. 🙂
Appreciation and Applauds 👏🏻
More power to you girl.. 👍
Keep it up
Very nice . Really touching. Keep it up
Very well articulated.
Very very well written. We can very well relate in today’s scenario. God bless
It’s a beautiful expression , Mahima. Each word is very powerful and heart touching. Commendable work indeed
Wow! That’s amazing.. And so very well written.. Very heart touching.. And completely puts across what we all feel in our hearts..
Nice poetry Mahima Great Work keep it up!
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