Surbhi
Take me.
Take me roughly.
Take me gently.
Take me against the kitchen counter.
Take me with your mouth on my breasts, covered in chocolate.
Take me with one hand grabbing my waist and the other my hair.
Take me as beads of sweat roll down our naked backs.
Take me after you tie my wrists and eat me like there is no tomorrow.
Take me till you feel me tremble against your skin.
Take me to my heaven,
before we go to hell.
Awesome!!! ❤❤
O My God! You nailed it.
great work !
The Last line..its sensuous..
This is so beautiful ❤️
“Take me to my heaven,
before we go to hell.”
Oh my my!!!
Dead.
This was so hot , The last line killed me!!
Oh my! This is such a sensuous poem. I am in love with the last line!
This is such an amazing poem. I love this one a lot.
“Take me to my heaven before we go to hell” is just a kickass end to the poem. All the sins forgiven for you write awesome poetry Surbhi. Kudos!!!