Lavanya Joshi
Remember the excitement
The awaiting of the summer vacation
The eagerness to lay in the hot summer breeze
Gazing for the train that sets to our summer destination
And discovering things about our nature.
Remember the mangoes ripped to be eaten fresh
And the watermelon whose seeds hit the bull’s-eye
The stories that filled our day
The spellers that filled our minds with new words
Remember the picnic near the sea shore
The sea shells that were collected
And the picture that we drew in the sea shore
The things we made out of best out of waste.
Remember the giggles that filled the home
Scaring our brothers and sisters with our fictitious stories
The song that we sang and the dance on the rhythm
And the warmth of our grandparents care.
Remember all mothers desperately waiting for the schools to reopen
The muddy hands while playing
The sixes that won our team of three and four
And the unwrapped doctor set that was ready for our first patient.
Remember the summer camp that enhanced our horizon of knowledge
The new friends that we made and forget
The bitterness of completing our summer homework.
And the sweetness of posing for the family photo shoot that mesmerised the old summer holidays.
Too Good Lava 💜
Words expressing the heartful feelings
Beautiful dear !
Words expressing the heartful feelings
Beautiful dear !
Words expressing the he heartful feelings
Beautiful dear !
Words expressing the he artful feelings
Beautiful dear !
GOOD IQ SHE WILL GAIN A LOT IN FUTURE IF ENCOURAGED AND PROPERLY MOTIVATED
I CONVEY MY GOOD WISHES
Very nicely scripted old memories Lavanya.Keep it up 👍👍
Best… All the points are so true and relatable…. Missing those sweet old golden days of our life❤️❤️❤️
Best… All the points are so true nad relatable…. Missing those sweet old golden days of our life❤️❤️❤️
Best… All the points are so true nad relatable…. Missing those sweet old golden days of our life❤️❤️❤️
Nice poetry,well said, this is what we all are missing these days.
It’s mesmerising and nostalgic. Very well written verse ,captivating poetry…
Well done lavanya
Mind blowing words & sentences well framed, also has all the contents to take us back to those young days when we were self made heroes & knew only to enjoy life & nothing else.
Lavanya you seem to be very matured for you age. A big round of applause dear 👏👏👏👏👏
Wow , Great Poetry , Lavanya , Will be Remembered always , Stay blessed & Keep writing 👌👌👌
Wow , Great Poetry , Lavanya , Will be Remembered always , Stay blessed & Keep writing 👌👌👌
Very Good. The poem took me 50 years back to my summer vacations. Keep it up beta. May God bless you.
Very Good. The poem took me 50 years back to my summer vacations. Keep it up beta. May God bless you.
Wonderfully written…. It captured the feelings, sights and sounds of a summer vacation so well… Keep up the good work 👍
Wonderfully written…. It captured the feelings, sights and sounds of a summer vacation so well… Keep up the good work 👍
Well said, remembering those days
Very well written I went back to my child hood days while reading
So well explained 👌👌👌👍👍
Great work lava keep it up