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No longer galvanized!

Mithun Dhyani

I breathe my own breath, but still sometimes I become so petrify,
Inadvertently, Others’ opinion captures me and I have no clue how to simplify?
I have become my lifelong critic and these days I stay ostracized,
If others matter to me so much, is that the sign of me being hypnotized?
Hence, I thought long and hard and decided not to get galvanized!

My experience was so terrible that everyone’s life looked so mesmerized,
Thus, when you compare yourself to the others that what leads to agonize!
However, every person has his own identity which is not easy to categorize,
We all are different, who are you to judge me? Have no rights to criticize.
Hence, I thought long and hard and decided not to get galvanized!

I felt myself inferior and comparison with others only amplified,
Apparently, I am the only one responsible for it as I let them get me crucified.
Since, we are responsible for our own fortunes, no one is there to incentivize,
Therefore, our comparison with others is wastage of time; only leads to dehumanize!
Hence, I thought long and hard and decided not to get galvanized!

My misery is an opportunity to have my ambitions internalized,
Henceforth, I chose my own density and what others say no longer required to scrutinize.
Friends, you don’t become triumphant unless you get your mind tranquilized,
So, let us release ourselves from the clutches of comparison and have our life systematized!
Hence, I thought long and hard and decided not to get galvanized!


14 comments

  • Very impressive n meaningful 👏👏👌🏻👌🏻

    Rachna Sharma
  • Amazing

    Hemanta Kumar Ghdia
  • Absolute beauty Mithun, each line is very impressive & mesmerizing. Kudos 👌

    Sanjeet Jha
  • Awesome Mithun

    Sandeep Bose
  • Awesome 👍

    Vishal
  • Congratulations Mithun👍👍u r a wonderful poet.Every line is so real that each one of us can relate to👏👏god bless bro😊

    Rajni Chaudhary
  • Very True.. and meaningful learning.. good

    Yogesh Sharma
  • Very True.. and meaningful learning.. good

    Yogesh Sharma
  • Very true & meaningful..

    Anil Naik
  • Mithun The writer in you has dobe a fantastic job. Extremely well presented keep it up

    C Mukesh Rao
  • Superb…..👌👌

    Prabhat jha
  • Very impressive, a piece of very thoughtful work 👏👏 keep it up 👍

    Shilpa Arora
  • Awesome.Every word is meaningful. Bravo Zulu,,🎩🎩🎩

    Anil Raut
  • superb work…..each n every line is magical🤩

    Pooja singh

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