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#Feelings!!!

Sarah  Abbas

One who had a tender heart,
One who was talented and smart,
One who used to call me sweetheart,
Now we have become poles apart.

I just don't know , why you ignore me?
Just tell me , For God's sake
Was that Love , a Fake?

Now , we are like Day and Night
That never merge together.
But still , Can you be my ....
Friend Forever?

Your reply is "NO"
And that too I know,
But the reason is still unknown.

I think, at times you also remember me,
But try to hide your feelings from me, Why all these strange feelings coming to me?
The reason is still unknown to me.

Is this a reality or an illusion?
Just tell me the reason;
And I will proceed , without any objection.


7 comments

  • For god sake, don’t make fun of poetry. This is not poetry. Poetry is an art and not everyone is an artist.
    Choose better words.

    Nanda kashyap
  • Well done keep it up
    Very heart Touching poem

    Jitendra Verma
  • The way of writing shows that the child who wrote this poem is in teen years , the child is confused for her feelings and the feelings depicted are immature and irrational .

    The parents are hugely respinsible for such kind of immature behaviour , if you want your child to make a career in poetry you should advise your child to appreciate some positivity.

    Dr.Trisha Arora
  • Very heart touching poem.Loved it❤️

    Aliza
  • Amazing poem…Loved it!!!

    Caddy
  • Once a person has said that the inner feelings can only be expressed with someone close to heart .But this poem has the true felling to express it has real emotion expressed by you

    Well done keep it up !! Loved it

    Rohan bajpai
  • Was this a poetry or just an amateur feeling of yours , increase your vocabulary kid or whoever “WANNABE” poet you are

    And this your reply is “NO” well ffs Sarah , no one cares about your feelings ,

    This isn’t a poem it’s just a piece of gibberish, a piece of advice sarah , INCREASE YOUR VOCABULARY .

    AND THE REVIEW WELL YOUR POEM IS SHIT , WITH NO PROPER USE OF SIMILIE AND METAPHOR .

    WANNABE HEARTBROKEN POET SARAH START WRITING REAL POEM’S NO ONE GIVES A FUCK ABOUT YOUR FEELINGS .

    Disgrace

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