Rashi Karir
Ek mudath hui lade tumse, ek arse se ishq fika hai..
Tere jane ke bad bhi ab tak, mere jeene ka yahi salika hai..
Voh bate, voh mulakate, voh din hi kuch aur the, voh bhi ek samay tha, jab tu aur me hum hua karte the..
Voh hasna aur hasana, voh ruthna aur manana, voh bhi ek haseen daur tha, mein teri tu mera, bich me na koi aur tha..
Un hawao me ek nasha sa tha, sayad voh tera hi suroor tha, un raho me bhi kuch toh bat thi ki har safar kamal lagta tha..
Teh toh safar sath chalne ka kia tha,lekn tum adhe raste hi mud gae, humne toh vada kia tha zindgai ke rang sath milkr bharege, par rangna toh dur tum toh hume berang hi kargae..
Ab kya batau jana ki yeh tumhara kesa nasha hai ki me ab tak khumar me hu, tu aakr bhi chala gaya aur mein ab tak tere intzar me hu..
Ha ek mudath hui lade tumse, ek mudath hui mile tumse, ek arse se ishq fika hai, pyar se jo likhi hai yeh nazme, ab vahi jeene ka salika hai..
Beautifully expressed the feelings … keep it up
Wow Rashi!! Such an in-depth piece of writing! Beautifully expressed…especially the way u ended!
Sundar.
nice
the awesomeness started from first line and ended at last superb work
Ek mudath hui lade tumse or “FIR BHI” ek arse se ishq fika hai = kafi hai.
Rashi this poem expresses depth of… Ones love for another …its beautiful.. Yaar???
Really love dis poem. I really can relate wid dis beautiful piece of ur imagination
Outstanding writing skills. Lovely poetry .
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Maan kr rha h mano bs din bhar pdhta rhu..????
Awesomeeeeeeee one ..?
Dil se nikli baat..dil ko chuu gyi..
Wow!! What a beautiful poem ??
Keep it up buddy & write more poems like this one?
Fabulous… very nicely written ☺
NICE WORDS… ?
No words to describe
It’s amazing yr?
Hey Rashi
Suhani asked me to read your poem and trust me its very beautiful… You have written it amazing… Keep it up ?
Very nice Rashi ,, ??? keep it up
It is stunning poem
Beautiful. ♥️♥️♥️
Rashi i would like to say, apka yeh jo dil se likhne ka salika hai yeh har pdne wale ke dil tak pahuncha hai :) God bless you.. Behad khoobsurat Nazm
This is very touching Rashi. Keep it up!!!♥️
Rashi may i have ur autograph plz…….
Loved it bcha… So proud of you… So refreshing.. ?
Nice .
Wonderful piece of expression u lil poetess? keep it up!!
Proud of you Rashi ..
Gazab ❤️
The best poem i have ever read in my life
It’s so beautiful ? bahot pyaari poem h …..fan ho gyi mein aapki …keep it up ….nd aese hi likhti raho pyaari pyaari poems
Beautiful….POU….❤❤
Beautiful….POU….❤❤
Wow ? Fab! RASHI