Suhani Rathi
Here I lay abandoned,
on the wrong side of the road,
feeling the loss of someone,
who was my light before.
Me with my tattered clothes,
a ruined smile,
and messy hair,
none of this compares,
to the chaos and hurt,
churning inside.
I am in complete despair,
remembering the days,
when we used to laugh together,
diving into her vivid imagination,
so wild and colourful,
were the adventures we experienced.
Despite the good times,
all the memories,
now that I am broken,
she has left me,
forgetting our glorious encounters,
for something more ‘grown up’.
I used to be so much more,
but now,
when people look at me,
their eyes devoid of sympathy,
there’s so much they fail to see,
to them, I am simply,
a doll,
abandoned at infinity.
Dear Suhani,
Such beautiful verse. I found something online that described your poetry beautifully;
“Poetry is ordinary language raised to the Nth power. Poetry is boned with ideas, nerved and blooded with emotions, all held together by the delicate, tough skin of words.” — Paul Engle, from an article in The New York Times.
Nikhil Nayak
Suhani dear, love the expression of your feelings through words ,it is beautiful. keep writing.
Suhani dear, love the expression of your feelings through words ,it is beautiful. keep writing.
Would love to read your other poems
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A lovely And a creative piece of portrayal of emotions of an abandoned toy. A new perspective so well written . So proud of u Suhani. Way to go.. Best wishes
Irresistible after the opening lines ! ! ! and the end is a masterstroke
Very Heart Touching poem Just like ur Name….. Suhani
Wonderful capacity to pen your thoughts making the words lively. Persuade your passion in all directions. You are sure to reach Great Heights. Love you.
All the best for your future.
Suhani, I have always marvelled at your sensitive perspective and depth of emotion. Keep writing. The world needs to hear your words. With love.
Suhani, I have always marvelled at your sensitive perspective and depth of emotion. Keep writing. The world needs to hear your words. With love.
My dear Suhani,
Simply superb and wonderfully penned down
the hidden reaility of life .I am just stunned how come U percive the imagination with
absolutely perfect lines which reveals the depth of mind.
My dear Su,heartening to read this poem__Abandoned At Infinity. It reminds
me your previous poetry book"DOWN IN THE GARDEN nd other poems"
All the best and waiting for the next .
You shaped the inner emotions into group of words and crafted it for the world to understand
Dear Suhani,
I am like dumbstruck….
Apparently it looks simple but the point has been punched in strongly….
And all this at such young age. Wondering what all you will pour on to the papers over the years t come….I for sure am eagerly looking forward to…
Hello World…..Therez a new star on the horizon….Watch out….
Dear Su – Really a superb poetry. At your age, how could you weave the Empathy by so apt words, The touching words ?? Excel in your this quality — my best wishes.
Very well written Suhani.
I absolutely love this!
What a beauty! 💛
On point !
Speechless,, so well written can b visualised every time it’s been read ,,, it’s living ,,, it live Right in front of My eyes 💖god bless☮️
How beautiful and real at so many levels. Poet Suhani…very well done. And this is just the beginning of many more lines that will be woven into poetry so effortlessly and will take the readers on a journey of wonderment. ah….to be so good with words, imagination and creativity all at once. Such a joy to read!
This is Amazing Suhaniii!!! I’m so proud of you!!!!
Super congratulations dear. Very well written 👏👏👏
Superb Suhani, very thoughtful and touching .
Thoughts so flawlessly penned , Great going Suhani , All the Very Best …
Beautifully expressed Suhani!
Very Well written. Way To Go Suhani.
It is beautifully composed with a wonderful essence… Best wishes Suhani
Lovelyyyy!!! Really let’s one penetrate into and experience the dark depths of loneliness
Truly a masterpiece … peerless poetry
Absolutely heart Randered
Awesome Suhani, absolutely love this one..